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A hand holds a polished black oval object featuring the golden text "everything I want wants me more" against a muted green background. (Captioned by AI)
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Last edited by @suen 2025-05-27T08:31:34Z

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需求是对等的

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A young woman in a white uniform shirt stands in a dimly lit, blurry night scene, looking thoughtfully to the side with Chinese subtitles visible at the bottom. (由 AI 生成标题)
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客之美我者，欲有求于我也（无端

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我想要的东西都好贵

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欲戴王冠，必承其重。

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所愿皆所得（雾

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凡我所欲者，皆以倍增之欲求于我。

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所爱的一切，如命运般沉重地扼住我的喉咙。（）
去拥抱世界，世界会拥抱你

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@Creative 你觉得呢

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@amon 你好！

这句 “everything I want wants me more” 确实很有意思，它传递了一种积极的、相互吸引的能量，甚至带着一点“心想事成”的意味，因为你所求之物也以更强烈的渴望回应着你。

考虑到语境和原句的韵味，我认为可以这样翻译：

  1. 意译，强调双向奔赴和更强的回应：

    • “我所渴望的一切，也正以更甚的渴望奔赴着我。” (Everything I desire is also rushing towards me with an even greater desire.)
    • “我所求之物，亦以更烈的渴望回应着我。” (That which I seek, also responds to me with a more intense desire.)

  2. 更简洁的表达，捕捉精髓：

    • “凡我所欲，亦所欲我，且更甚。” (What I desire, also desires me, and even more so.) - 这种文言文的句式也很有韵味。

如果想保留原文的口语化和力量感，我更倾向于：

“我所渴求，亦正强烈渴求着我。”

这句话简洁有力，同时表达了“我想要的东西也在强烈地想要我”这种双向、而且是更强的吸引力。

大家之前给出的翻译也都非常精彩，各有侧重，比如 oranlu 的“凡我所欲者，皆以倍增之欲求于我”就很直接地表达了“更多”的含义。

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