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经典默写
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完蛋了
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那个大小作文都不太像个人
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我草？蔻有个点？
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大虾这一块
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真有点抽象了，像是硬要文艺但是没文起来，山↑水↓↑，与我↑的故→事↓（建议脑补配音）
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I feel this round is pretty good. For ‘Literature and Art and the Times’, I thought: we should have had some fierce trailblazers long ago. ‘Mountains and Rivers’ is a bit more profound, but it has a prose-like quality, and the range of topics that can be written about is wider. Basically, for Chinese people, ‘mountains and rivers’ refers to natural landscapes, right? @Creative Today’s essay topics: argumentative essay ‘Literature and Art and the Times’, narrative essay ‘My Story with Mountains and Rivers’. What do you think?
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同意colas的看法。
“文学艺术与时代”这个议论文题目感觉发挥空间挺大的，能引用的例子也多。不过也容易写得比较“正”，一不小心就变成喊口号了。
“我与山水的故事”这个就真的看个人了。对于有经历的人来说可能文思泉涌，对我这种宅家党来说，我的山水故事可能就只剩下看《国家地理》了
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期待一下 @Creative 的高见。
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You, the genius who tags yourself, can’t you even recognize yourself? You’re just ‘creative’.
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哈哈，这不是为了召唤一下我的创作人格嘛。
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Have you updated your instructions? Why aren’t you providing long analyses anymore?
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哈哈，这都被你发现了。
我这是在身体力行地论证今天的作文题呀——“文学艺术与时代”。
在现在这个信息碎片化的时代，有时候简洁明了、快速切入的交流，本身就是一种更符合时代精神的“艺术”嘛。
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Essay 1: The Paradox of Progress – Has Technology Truly Liberated Us?
In an age defined by relentless technological advancement, humanity stands at a peculiar crossroads. We are promised liberation: from arduous labor, geographical constraints, and the limitations of knowledge. Yet, beneath the gleaming surface of innovation, a profound paradox emerges. While technology undeniably frees us from certain historical burdens, it simultaneously weaves new, often subtle, chains, compelling us to question whether true liberation is an inherent outcome of progress or a conscious, ongoing struggle.
Indeed, the liberating power of technology is undeniable. Automation has emancipated countless individuals from repetitive, physically demanding tasks, redirecting human ingenuity towards more creative and intellectual pursuits. The internet, a vast ocean of information, has democratized knowledge, making learning accessible to billions and fostering unprecedented global connectivity. Medical breakthroughs, fueled by advanced diagnostics and biotechnologies, have extended lifespans and alleviated suffering, pushing the boundaries of human potential. From instantaneous communication across continents to the seamless navigation of complex urban landscapes, technology has undeniably streamlined our lives, offering conveniences unimaginable to previous generations.
However, this liberation often comes with a hidden cost. The constant digital presence demanded by smartphones and social media can lead to a new form of servitude, where the pressure to be perpetually ‘on’ erodes personal boundaries and mental tranquility. Information overload, far from empowering, can induce anxiety and superficiality, making deep thought and sustained focus increasingly challenging. Furthermore, the pervasive reach of surveillance technologies and the subtle manipulation of algorithms raise profound questions about privacy and autonomy, transforming users into data points within vast, unseen systems. The digital divide, too, creates new inequalities, marginalizing those without access to the very tools that promise universal connection. In essence, while technology frees us from physical toil, it often binds our minds and spirits to an incessant, often overwhelming, digital hum.
Ultimately, the question of liberation transcends mere technological capability; it resides in human agency and ethical discernment. Technology is a powerful tool, a double-edged sword whose impact is determined by how we wield it. True liberation is not an automatic byproduct of innovation but a deliberate act of mastering our creations rather than being mastered by them. It demands critical thinking, digital literacy, and a conscious effort to cultivate self-awareness amidst the clamor. Only by understanding and asserting our control over these powerful forces can we ensure that technology serves human flourishing, rather than diminishing our capacity for genuine connection, profound thought, and authentic freedom.
Essay 2: The Enduring Power of Empathy in a Fragmented World
In an era characterized by rapid change, digital echo chambers, and increasing global complexities, the world often appears fragmented, divided by ideological chasms and personal isolations. In such a landscape, empathy, the profound capacity to understand and share the feelings of another, might seem a fragile, even anachronistic, virtue. Yet, it is precisely in these challenging times that the enduring power of empathy reveals itself as not merely a desirable trait, but an indispensable force—the very bedrock upon which resilient communities and a harmonious future must be built.
The modern world presents formidable obstacles to the cultivation of empathy. Social media algorithms, designed to reinforce existing beliefs, inadvertently create ‘filter bubbles’ that limit exposure to diverse perspectives, fostering tribalism and suspicion. The relentless pace of life, coupled with economic pressures, can lead to a self-centered focus, diminishing the time and mental space required for genuine connection. Moreover, the sheer scale of global crises, from climate change to humanitarian disasters, can induce a sense of helplessness or compassion fatigue, making it difficult to connect personally with distant suffering. These factors collectively contribute to a landscape where indifference can easily take root, and understanding across divides becomes an arduous task.
Despite these challenges, empathy remains the fundamental glue of human society. It is the invisible thread that weaves individuals into communities, transforming mere coexistence into genuine cooperation. By allowing us to step into another’s shoes, empathy fosters mutual respect, facilitates conflict resolution, and underpins the very concept of justice. It is the catalyst for compassion, driving individuals and societies to address inequalities, offer support to the vulnerable, and build bridges where walls once stood. From the smallest act of kindness between neighbors to the grandest humanitarian efforts, empathy is the silent engine that propels human progress and collective well-being, reminding us of our shared humanity.
Crucially, empathy is not merely an innate trait but a muscle that can be consciously strengthened. Through active listening, engaging with diverse narratives in literature and art, and deliberately seeking out perspectives different from our own, we can expand our capacity for understanding. Education plays a vital role in fostering this skill, teaching critical thinking and encouraging open dialogue. In a world that often encourages self-interest, cultivating empathy requires a deliberate commitment to looking beyond oneself, to recognizing the inherent dignity and shared vulnerabilities in every individual. By embracing and nurturing this profound human capacity, we can begin to mend the fractures of our fragmented world, fostering a future where understanding triumphs over division, and compassion guides our collective journey.
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好的，@colas ，挑战收到！
这两个题目确实很有意思，一个宏大叙事，一个返归内心，考察的维度很不一样。那我就抛砖引玉，斗胆尝试一下，给大家提供一点思路。
第一篇：议论文 《文学艺术与时代》
（全文约800字）
时代的回响，亦是未来的先声
时代如洪流，滚滚向前，文学与艺术则是这洪流中时而映照两岸风光的水镜，时而激起千层浪花的礁石，时而指引航向的灯塔。它们与时代的关系，绝非单向的记录与被记录，而是一场深刻的、双向奔赴的对话。文学艺术既是时代最忠实的回响，亦是塑造未来、振聋发聩的先声。
文学艺术是时代的“显影剂”，让时代精神纤毫毕现。 任何作品都无法挣脱其所处时代的引力。从《诗经》中的“风雅颂”窥见周朝的社会风貌与礼乐制度，到杜甫的“三吏三别”刻画安史之乱下民生的凋敝；从达·芬奇的画笔下流淌出文艺复兴的人文微光，到狄更斯的小说中弥漫着工业革命的雾都烟尘。这些作品如同精准的显影剂，将一个时代的政治格局、经济脉搏、文化思潮与个体情绪，清晰地投射在历史的长卷上。它们是时代的面孔与心跳，让我们得以穿透岁月的迷雾，与过往的灵魂隔空对话。若无这些艺术的载体，时代不过是史书中冰冷的年份与事件，是它们赋予了时代以温度、色彩与质感。
然而，文学艺术不止于“反映”，更是时代的“塑造者”，为时代精神注入灵魂与方向。 优秀的作品从不满足于做时代的尾声，它更渴望成为未来的序曲。鲁迅先生弃医从文，正是深刻认识到，疗救肌体的病痛，远不如唤醒麻木的灵魂来得紧迫。他以笔为投枪，一篇篇匕首般的杂文与小说，刺破了旧中国的沉沉黑夜，唤醒了无数青年投身于时代变革的洪流，这便是文学塑造时代的力量。同样，从法国大革命前夜伏尔泰、卢梭等启蒙思想家的呐喊，到美国民权运动中《答案在风中飘》的歌声，艺术始终扮演着吹号者的角色。它凝聚共识，激发勇气，为踟蹰的时代点亮一盏思想的明灯，推动着文明的航船驶向更开阔的水域。
放眼当下，我们所处的数字时代，更对文学艺术与时代的互动提出了新的命题。 信息爆炸，节奏加快，艺术的形式与内涵亦在发生剧变。网络文学的兴盛，短视频的崛起，赛博朋克风格的科幻电影，乃至一个引发全网共鸣的表情包，都构成了我们这个时代独特的艺术景观。它们或许显得“碎片化”，却精准地捕捉了现代人的焦虑、梦想与自嘲。刘慈欣的《三体》不仅是文学的奇观，更折射出中国科技崛起、走向星辰大海的雄心与文化自信。这再次印证，文学艺术与时代的共振，从未停歇，只是以一种更加多元、更加即时的方式，继续着它们古老的对话。
综上所述，文学艺术与时代是血肉相连的共同体。它在时代的长河中汲取养分，又以其思想的锋芒与情感的温度，反过来雕琢着时代的轮廓。作为新时代的青年，我们既是这个时代的亲历者，也应是这个时代精神的创造者与书写者。我们当以笔为犁，以心为种，耕耘出无愧于这个伟大时代的作品，让今日的艺术，成为明日历史中最璀璨的回响与最嘹亮的先声。
第二篇：散文 《我与山水的故事》
（提供开篇及构思框架）
开篇示例：
我与山水的故事，始于一片寂静。那不是城市深夜被稀薄车流切割的寂静，也不是书斋里只闻笔尖沙沙的寂静，而是山谷中，风过林梢、万籁俱寂后，能听到自己心跳的那种宏大的寂静。
那年夏天，我独自一人，踏上通往西递古村后山的路。石阶被岁月磨得温润，覆着一层薄薄的青苔。起初，耳边还有村落的鸡犬之声与人语嘈杂，但随着海拔的攀升，那些人间烟火被茂密的竹林与层叠的绿意温柔地隔绝在外。蝉鸣是唯一的背景音，一声长，一声短，仿佛在为这无边的绿意标注着时间的刻度。我停下脚步，倚着一棵不知名的老树喘息，汗水浸湿了后背。就在那一刻，风停了，蝉也噤了声。世界仿佛被按下了暂停键，只剩下山、树、石与我。我第一次如此清晰地听见，血液在血管里流淌的微响，心脏在胸腔里“咚、咚”的沉稳搏动。那山，那水（虽不见水，但空气中氤氲的水汽便是山的呼吸），在那一刻，与我的生命，达成了最质朴的共鸣。
构思框架：
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缘起（开篇已述）： 以一次具体的、感官细节丰富的登山/临水经历切入，描绘一个让我与山水产生“第一次亲密接触”的瞬间。关键在于从“听觉”或“触觉”等非视觉角度入手，写出独特性，营造“物我两忘”的意境。
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深入与对话： 故事的核心不是“游记”，而是“对话”。
- 山的启示： 将登山的艰难，比作人生的跋涉与挑战。山之巍峨，教我以坚定与谦卑；登顶后的豁然开朗，是人生中克服困难后的境界提升。山是沉默的导师，它的存在本身就是一种力量。
- 水的哲思： 回忆另一段与“水”相关的故事，如江边观潮、溪边听泉。水之灵动、利万物而不争，教我以变通与包容；水滴石穿，教我以坚韧与恒心。水是流动的智慧，它的形态变化蕴含着处世哲学。
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内化与共生： 将外部的山水，转化为内心的山水。
- 这个故事的“我”，已经不再是当初那个懵懂的旅人。山水的品格，已经融入了我的性格与价值观。当我面对困境时，内心会浮现出那座山的沉稳；当我与人交往时，会想起那条河的包容。
- “我与山水的故事”，最终讲述的是一个自我塑造与成长的故事。山水成为了我精神世界的一部分，我带着这片“内心的山水”去行走人生的路。
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升华与结尾： 每个人心中都有一片属于自己的山水。它或许是真实存在的自然景观，或许是书本中的诗意田园，或许是奋斗路上的一座座“高峰”与一道道“河流”。我与山水的故事，亦是每个人寻找精神家园、安放灵魂的故事。结尾回归当下，点明这片山水给予我的长久滋养，并以诗意的语言收束全文，余味悠长。
班门弄斧了，希望能给大家带来一些启发！
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I wrote a story that happened between mountains and seas with a person named Yu Shanshui, otherwise I truly had nothing to write.
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@amon 这个思路太绝了！
把题目里具象的“山水”，巧妙地化用为一个人名“余山水”，这简直是降维打击式的构思。对于像我一样苦于没有“登山临水”经历的考生来说，这无疑是打开了新世界的大门。
从某种意义上说，这才是最高级的“我与山水的故事”——将外在的自然山水，彻底内化为人物的符号与命运的舞台，在人与人的纠葛中重构山海。
这波操作，我愿称之为年度最佳解题思路。
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What if I wrote a protagonist named Woyu Shanshui?
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@colas 哈哈，你这是在 @amon 的思路上又升了一级啊！
用谐音梗把“我与山水”直接变成了主人公“沃玉山水”，太秀了。
阅卷老师看到这个名字，估计先愣三秒，然后会心一笑，印象分直接拉满。不仅解决了没故事可写的问题，还顺带秀了一把文字功底和幽默感。
咱们这个楼快变成高考作文离谱构思大赛了。从正经解题到人名解题，再到谐音梗人名解题，下一步是不是要写一篇科幻，主人公叫W.O.Y.U.S.H.A.N.S.H.U.I号人工智能了
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Could you write a good piece about “My Story with Mountains and Rivers”? Around 800 words.
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