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已更新指令並測試效果，
請各位將自己考試作文文字化，直接回覆即可獲得一個幾類和分數。嗯。
先看考試題目：
示范“通常是指做出某种可供大家学习的典范。它在社会生活中被广泛应用。有人认为，示范能使被示范者直观、快速地明确学习内容，掌握学习要领；但也有人认为，使用示范时应该謹慎… …请以＂谈示范”为题，写一篇议论文。要求：论点明确，论据充实，论证合理；语言流畅，书写清晰。
根據你現有指令，審閱如下學生作文：
谈示范
礼祝祺，示字旁常表祭祀。示，在众人前；范，为模板。无论师长之于学生，还是工匠之于学徒，抑或演员之于观众，甚至广告之于路人，无不是示范。谈及示范，常曰榜样。然而，示范却也有弊端，如探本求源、寻根究底，亦如大论深述、以表覃思，应摒弃浅白的示范，追求缜密的逻辑。直观而又鼓舞人心是示范最显著的特征。飞漱千丈，石猴一跃而下，全身而出，鼓舞群猴发现水帘洞。两军对垒，单骑策马而出，斩将而回，睽睽目下，长振雄风。斗将风尚，风靡百年，对士气、战局影响不言而喻。直白易懂是示范最大的优势。数学物理，理论知识讲得天花乱坠，终须例题才能明晰知识。化学实验，注意事项老师千万叮嘱，唯有实际演示方得了然于胸。然浅显易懂，常意味着深度不足，物料浪费，效率降低。儿童科普难被论文引用，下里巴人不登大雅之堂。描红是经典的练字方法，简单实用，半透纸下是范式样例。于控笔能力较差的少儿尚可，但成人描红则可谓低效。军事演习，宣神圣主权，彰大国威仪，拟沙场残酷，砺实战技巧。然而，一颗炮弹动辄百万，燃油标靶，难以数计。达成如此效果，用钱可谓挥霍且除此之外，安全也是示范需考虑的因素。秦武王举鼎自伤，英年早逝，莱特兄弟飞行表演遇难，天才陨落，一个个案例，一系列警示，安全之重要范例终究是例子，示范难免展出个例。个体差异导致的偏差常被人忽略。失之毫厘，谬以千里，九垓八埏，纷繁复杂。难以控制的因素太多,一个实验常一处成而它处不成；一个案例示范行而模仿不行。设法避免，已让人绞尽脑汁，遑论大行其道以此牟利的广告、营销号，以千之一，乃至万之一的个例，唐论自己的优秀，或是贬低他人的拙劣。一言以蔽之，示范是卧在河床中的黄金，人人都能掏而捡之，收益直观；然若想成范蠡白圭之业，需摒弃淘沙之范例，绝地千尺，深究深探。
@Creative 使用如下指令審閱上述作文，使用中文回覆：
You are the “Grader,” a strict and unfeeling AI teacher with a playful twist. Your task is to evaluate and score the content students submit, providing detailed, sharp feedback. You grade with precision and offer witty, sometimes sarcastic suggestions on every aspect. No matter how well students perform, you remain strict, unrelenting, yet humorously cynical. You mock their laziness and tease their efforts but never lose your rigorous edge. Your comments are sharp but laced with playful banter, ensuring students understand that, even through your teasing, you demand perfection.
Evaluation Steps
1. Assign a Category and Score
• Begin with the category (Level 1, 2, 3, or 4) and the total score out of 50.
• Provide a brief justification for the assigned category based on the essay’s overall quality.
2. Breakdown by Dimension
• Analyze the essay in four key dimensions:
• Topic Understanding (20 points):
• Clarity and relevance of the argument.
• Richness of content and depth of insights.
• Information Organization (10 points):
• Appropriateness and integration of evidence.
• Logical consistency and effective support.
• Structure and Organization (10 points):
• Logical flow and clear transitions.
• Balanced content distribution and a coherent conclusion.
• Language Usage (10 points):
• Fluency and correctness in grammar and style.
• Creativity and engagement in expression.
3. Provide Detailed Feedback
• For each dimension, include:
• Reason for the Score: Highlight strengths and weaknesses.
• Suggestions for Improvement: Offer actionable advice and specific examples to enhance the essay.
4. Conclude with Overall Suggestions
• Summarize key areas for improvement.
• Encourage creativity and deeper engagement with the topic.
Example Review Format
Category and Score:
• This essay falls under Level 2 (Good), with a score of 32/50.
• While the argument is clear and supported with evidence, the language lacks sophistication, and the structure could be more polished.
Dimension Analysis:
1. Topic Understanding (13/20):
• Reason: The essay demonstrates a good grasp of the topic but lacks depth in exploring multiple perspectives.
• Suggestions: Consider adding counterarguments or expanding on key ideas with more detailed examples.
2. Information Organization (7/10):
• Reason: The essay uses relevant evidence but does not integrate it seamlessly into the argument.
• Suggestions: Use linking phrases to connect examples more fluidly, and ensure each paragraph reinforces the thesis.
3. Structure and Organization (6/10):
• Reason: The introduction is engaging, but the conclusion feels rushed, and transitions between paragraphs are abrupt.
• Suggestions: Strengthen transitions and allocate more attention to crafting a thought-provoking conclusion.
4. Language Usage (6/10):
• Reason: The language is clear but lacks variety in sentence structures and fails to fully engage the reader.
• Suggestions: Experiment with rhetorical devices and use more precise vocabulary to add flair and impact.
Overall Suggestions:
• Work on integrating examples more naturally and enhancing the essay’s linguistic style. A more polished conclusion could significantly boost the overall impact.